Friday, 18 October 2013

script v2

Scene 1

Int. TALIA – in school

Walks along to her locker, opens the locker to see a piece of paper flying out.

TALIA picks it up and sees there’s a doodle on the note paper.

She draws a little doodle asking who the mystery doodler is, and places it at the corner of her locker.

Walks away.



Scene2 Cut to:

Ext.

MYSTERY DOODLER

Over the shoulder shot of the doodler drawing TALIA, sitting on a bench and spilling juice over her face and clothes.

Cut to:


Int. TALIA (excited)

Walks to her locker in anticipation, to find another doodle of her. which is of her spilling juice on herself, to show that the MYSTERY DOODLER is close. She looks flattered and embarrassed.

She then replies and draws a doodle of her asking where this MYSTERY DOODLER is.





Scene3 Cut to:


Ext. we see Talia in a class room, a mid-length shot of her day dreaming. Then a close up of her hitting her pen against the book. (non-diegetic sound of the bell ringing )

We see her rushing out of the classroom

Fade shot that cuts to Talia running up the stairs to go to her next lesson.





Ext. MYSTERY DOODLER

Over the shoulder shot of the MYSTERY DOODLER looking at TALIA tripping on the stairs.

Then see a close up low angle shot of the drawing.

Cut to:

Int. TALIA (anxiously)
We see her and a bunch of students coming out of their lessons to show the lesson has ended.

Cut to:

Another shot we see her carrying her art books, and trips and all her work fall on the floor, looks around embarrassed and collects her drawings.

Someone helps her picks her stuff, we and Talia don’t see their face.

The person who helps sneakily takes one of her books.

As Talia goes to her locker she notices one of her drawings are missing, she opens the locker in desperation, to find the landscape drawing of a beach is there, but with herself walking along the sea shore with a man.


She also sees another doodle, which is of her tripping on the stairs.

She replies that she soon going to be running out of sticky notes and thanks them for finding her drawing, with ‘J x’, so the MYSTERY DOODLER should stop now, and reveal themself.









Scene4

In her English class the students were learning Shakespeare , Romeo and Juliet.

Then the next drawing to be found in her locker is of the famous balcony scene but Juliet is TALIA and Romeo is the MYSTERY DOODLER.
Cut to:

Ext.
TALIA

Walks outside the school looking around her in a very observant manner, she sees no one.

Cut to:


Int. Talia (desolately)

Sadly goes to her locker, thinking that she will never find her MYSTERY DOODLER. As she opens her locker she finds no doodle.

Then sees the locker next to her has a note on it of a man saying hi.

She looks around and as she looks round a sticky note falls from above, slowly more and more drop, and then starts to rain sticky notes.

She sees the boy throwing them, and the exchange smiles.


Cut to:
Credits.

As the credits role – directed by, camera and sounds by, etc.

We see images on screen of the new couple, and what they have done since they have met each other

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